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She tried to enter the ball quietly, but fate had other plans. Each step she took in her heels brought more silence from the crowd and more eyes in her direction. Jemma wanted to shrink away from their awed expressions, but her resolve wouldn’t allow her to do so. She was there for a purpose and she wouldn’t let anxiety stop her. With a poise and grace that matched her beauty, Jemma scanned the face in the crowd until she spotted him. She gave him a tender smile and made her way towards him, blue eyes dancing with happiness. The beauty slid into his arms and she inhaled his scent as she buried her nose into his chest. How could have ever been afraid of this? When she finally glanced up, he was still slack-jawed. She merely giggled and squeezed him tight.
“Y-you came?” her beau said.
“Yes, I did.” Jemma told him as the music started back up. “I couldn’t stay away. I also promised you that you would have a date for the ball.”
“But that’s the fifth spell!” he said as held Jemma close. “that means...”
“Yes, I’m Jemma forever. But it’s OK... I’m glad.” she said without a hint of regret.
“But why?”
“Because, Mark, I’m your best friend. I didn’t want to let you down. Because the last four times we used the spell I enjoyed being a girl way more than I let on. Because that time I pretended to be your girlfriend during spring break was the most wonderful time of my life. And Because I love you.” Jemma blushed, still not believing she admitted it out loud. Her heart thumped under her breasts as a torrid flood of emotions swept over her. The uncertainty in Mark’s eyes almost made her pull away, but all fears were calmed by a simple kiss on the lips. Her eyes closed as she melted into him, finally sure she had made the right choice.
“I love you too,” Mark managed after they broke the kiss. “I was just..scared.”
“Well, you’ll have to get over it quickly.” Jemma said with a smirk. “If I’m going to be a girl for you, then you better take care of me. I’ll require lots of pampering and attention.” She giggled when his eyes rolled, but was silenced by another intimate kiss. “Ok, that’s a good start.”
Highly enjoyable storyline, there.
ReplyDeleteTo me it's all in the story telling - having believable characters, the narration and imagery - rather than it being a question of having softer more gentle style or something more hardcore. Sometimes a well thought out more softer caption leaves more of a lingering hold over me all day although a racier more sexy caption gets me all hot and bothered as i'm sure You know, Mistress. i might get around to writing a personal theme reference one day to help captioners like You.
Regards belinda
Highly enjoyable storyline, there.
ReplyDeleteTo me it's all in the story telling - having believable characters, the narration and imagery - rather than it being a question of having softer more gentle style or something more hardcore. Sometimes a well thought out more softer caption leaves more of a lingering hold over me all day although a racier more sexy caption gets me all hot and bothered as i'm sure You know, Mistress. i might get around to writing a personal theme reference one day to help captioners like You.
Regards belinda
I find people's motivations and kinks for what they read to be interesting sometimes. Often I don't always relate but it's fun to have some explain their desires. It gives me more understanding and different perspectives to explore.
DeleteFirst of all, loved the caption!
ReplyDeleteYour question for discussion intrigued me though, as this is something I’ve been thinking about recently. I do like all types of ratings and content and sometimes I seek out the more “racy” caps or the more tame ones depending on my mood, but the most important factor for me is the mental aspect. How a character reacts to a situation that is out of their control or maybe within their control could be just as interesting (or titilating) in a caption with or without nudity or depictions of sex. It’s really dependant on the storyteller. And when it comes to sex, it doesn’t need to be shown necessarily. There’s also a lot to be said of course about leaving things to the reader’s imagination. Some of my favorite captions set up a scenario and then provide no stated resolution at all, leaving the reader to imagine the conclusion as their own desires see fit.
So in short, explicit content or no, it’s always about the story. It’s all mental after all.
Your response is pretty much how I caption things. Whatever I'm feeling, I make. If it happens to be explicit, I will do it. If I'm feeling softer, then the stories will flow that way. I want the story to be interesting above all else, then I it all to be pleasing to the eye.
DeleteVery nice work, Simone. For a (relatively) short caption, it tells a big story.
ReplyDeleteMy vote is for PG and soft images; because then the caption has a chance to be smart and classy. IMHO, racy pics are usually just tacky.
I have found racy images that ooze class . . . they are just hard to find!
DeleteSometimes I just feel more wicked than classy and the captions have reflected it. A dark theme can be a lot of fun to play with, explicit image or not. Some find it more shocking when the image is more tame.
I think the softer images allow for more story range usually. The focal point isn't always on sex so there can be more told in them. Imagination is the key to finding the right way to use the image.
It's nice to see someone sacrifice for love, even if it's not really that much of a sacrifice. Very Nice CAP. >:)
ReplyDeleteI can enjoy a sweeter theme. Tugging at the heartstrings is an effective way to invoke a reaction sometimes. Plus I just love happy endings.
DeleteThis one was made especially for someone who adores sweeter, girlish tropes and I had been playing with the "rom-com" formula for captions of late.
Cute! As you know, I love sweet themed captions :) This cap is another great version of the classic fairy tale trope. Your marvelous story telling however is what helps set it apart :)
ReplyDeleteAs for your discussion question, I like both. As you've probably noticed on my blog, I tend to swing to both sides, just dependent on my mood, so I definitely appreciate both! What I do love though are hints and suggestions towards more explicit content/actions without necessarily showing it. I'm always game for good puns and double entendres.
Loved the tenderness and love in this cap!!
ReplyDeleteI typically enjoy caps that are like a Harlequin romance with a bit of hardcore erotica mixed in. I like the story to explore the interaction between the characters. If the man has transformed into a woman, he finds enjoyment in the switch and his new life. And she also is looking forward to experiencing the ecstasy in using her new body! All of this because that's my fantasy!!
I enjoy pictures that show the beauty and elegance and sexiness of a woman, often times in an exotic locale.
Of course, there are the occasional times that I like to see and read pure erotica! But usually love and tenderness and elegance are my favored caps.
I had a little more time to think about this subject and realized that the 4 things I would most like to experience as a woman are romance, seduction, passion and intimacy. A story with those 4 themes, along with beautiful clothes and a beautiful setting, would be my ideal.
ReplyDeleteCiao! Elise
I thought it was beautiful and fabulous. I am certainly a sucker for sweetness, tenderness, and acceptance. Which isn't to say that I don't have a sweet spot for a little raunchiness, and good ole fashioned sucking. Write what move you, and it will most likely move others as well.
ReplyDeleteA little late, but I thought I'd share my opinion too.
ReplyDeleteReally there are two different types of captions that hit home. The first type are the ones I can fantasize myself into. Obviously happy endings or sweet ones where a relationship with a wife or girlfriend is strengthened by the change are the preference.
On the other hand, seeing someone submerged in pleasure, or stripped down to their base slutty essence really gets me breathing hard. Thinking of all the day to day pressures and responsibilities evaporate leaving behind a happy curvy bimbo, well I'll never say no to those captions.
Not to late to comment! Thanks for stopping in and I hope you'll continue.
ReplyDeleteFirst of all, LOVE the Preview Stamp for this. Your preview stamps are becoming an art form in themselves and worthy of collection!!
ReplyDeleteI loved the sweet romance of this, and the conversation between the two, the tenderness, affection and acceptance. It really melted me as a Cap Gift and I just wanted to say again how perfect this was.
To answer your question, I love Caps that deal with emotion and sensuality. I'm not much for in your face images, its always the words that get me. I can love the racier images if they are melded with beautiful, exquisite words or are part of some intricate laid trap.
I think I come down in the middle, based on my mood, but skewing more towards romance and emotions. Lust and kink are good when I am swept away by the exquisite pleasure of them, and usually in some sort of safe relationship.
I think I value the safety, happiness and home just as much as I value the feelings from giving in to pleasure and abandon. If the two come together, I melt into a pile of goo!!
Being molded into someone's Perfect Mate, all of this gets churned together into a basic meltdown of all my inhibitions!! So those Caps usually break all the rules for me or really done well are like Pleasure Catnip.
Thank you again for your lovely genius, and asking questions that make me think.