Made for Chelsea Baker @ Rachel's Haven |
Chelsea's preferences are those of a revenge/karma tone. Atoning for sins and pass transgressions or being switched from one extreme to the other. In this case, I wanted to concentrate on the vengeance/ divine retribution angle. I originally wrote the voodoo priestess with a very literal Bayou accent. I quickly realized it was too hard to read so I switched it to something more readable.
Also, this caption is just another example of how revisions can lead you from one place to another:
This is the original finished version- note the revised writing and typos. Also the text doesn't pop the same way. I thought it was fine, but the whole cap wasn't "alive" in my eyes. I finally edited the above version and the top is the final result.
wow cool swich hun, love the angel. nice work :)
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ReplyDeleteThe final take was worth the extra effort, Goddess.
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I think both version are pretty good, but I like the layout of the one with colored text better.
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