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There she is . . Miss Taken . . .
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This caption has an interesting story. This wasn't the original image for this story. I did a little refitting after an someone's commentary about the original. They found an element distracting. I fiddled with it a bit and found a different picture and made a few changes. It's odd for me to do so, but I kind of like the second one better. I suppose I should because it is a second go around. Below you'll find the original.
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Only a few sentences changed, added and/or subtracted. While I enjoy the second more now, I still love the original image. I plan on using it again for another story. We have to see what kind of story it will inspire.
I have to admit that I like the picture in the updated cap better: the dress, the silky hair, her look, the sparkly crown. To me it adds up to a better final product.
ReplyDeleteJust my 2 cents.
Ciao! Elise
I really like the image on the original and i'm sure you'll come up with the caption for it.
ReplyDeleteThe wording is that bit more sharper in the second, making more of the idea you had in mind.
Regards Belinds
A great caption think I prefer the photo you went with.
ReplyDeleteAh, the thrill of it all. To expose yourself in public, worrying that you'll be caught. It must have been an interesting experience for the character. That said, I agree with Ian, the original photo is better but nevertheless, great cap all around.
ReplyDeleteI think I liked the original better, but the image speaks more to MY tropes than the person you gifted it to. I think the second was a much more suitable gift to the recipient, but both are lovely.
ReplyDeleteThis just goes to show how much you care about your art and it's effect on others, and that's not a bad thing by any means.