"Pandora's Gift" or "Unwrapping The New You"

Yesterday, Evie made me something naughty, so I thought this was the proper way to return the favor:

This is one of those happy accidents that become something more than  you expect.  A new member at Rachel's Haven asked me for some advice during an IM session.  My advice to them was to use a picture to enhance instead of re-describing the image.  Little details are OK, but no need to go over every little thing that appears.  As an example, I showed them this image and told them to give me a method of change and two details or stipulations.  She choose "Cursed item", "Permanent Change" and "Mental Changes."

For this, I stuck with a straightforward transformation caption because in my experience no where does the "show, not tell" rule get broken more than with these types of caps.  A common thing to do with a transformation caption is to take every detail and talk about every change.  The end result turns into three paragraphs about the swelling of breasts or the transformation of a cock to a pussy.

In this one, I tried to use only a few things to emphasize the change, but limit my use of details in the image itself.  I mainly used the clothing as a means to contrast the drastic change between male and female.  All of this popped in my head in about five minutes and I typed it up in about another five.  I typed it up in the IM window as we talked.   When it was done, I thought "this could be a solid caption."  I decided to take the text, clean it up and do some revisions and had it checked for typos.  The thing that took the longest was the design.  It went thru two revisions until I decided on this one above.

I hope you lovely dolls enjoyed the little peek behind the exercise that created this cap.  Let me know what you think.  Until next time, dolls.