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So while I was making a caption for someone, I came across these pictures. I wasn't in the mood to do a series, but i didn't want to waste such wonderful pictures. I had to ideas as to how I wanted this to go and after reading an interesting post about plots on Dee-lusions of Grandeur, I decided to try out the same concept but from different points of view. I wrote the Version 1.0 and wondered "What if she could warn someone? There were so many ideas to go with! Either way, I hope they are both enjoyable. Pick your favorite!
I love both of these caps! If you didn't point out that they were both made as stand alone caps, then I would have thought they were a series.
ReplyDeleteIf I had to pick out one of them as my favorite, then I would have to say Version 2.0. simply because of her description of her new body to mark and the line about being teased with the strap-on.
Really good Simone, feel free to post any of my captions gifts to you in your blog
ReplyDeleteHugs and Kisses Alectra
Wow... both are really great. If I had a gun to my head and HAD to choose, I would go with version two. Only because after the humiliation of being transformed and used, she gets to experience another humiliation from her 'savior'.
ReplyDeleteCaitlyn - You're the second to say that and I thin it's because most like the personal element to it. Some might want to identify with her. Either way I'm glad you approve!
ReplyDeleteI think that both versions are awesome. :) The pictures already tell so much of the story and then the slight humilation in the text, the nice description of the body ... wonderful. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat job. Martha
i preferred version two as the layout was less busy while keeping all the delicious elements of story intact.i just love the humilation of being used.
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