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Saturday, April 9, 2011

[Classic Caption - June 2010]"Less Than Nothing" or "Something To Pass The Time"

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Looking back on this caption, I love the story but I'm not as happy with the execution.  It's a classic theme and many girls dream of such a situation.  I just feel I could make it more vibrant if I rewrote it from a different angle.
Still, the attitude is one I love.  The absolute uncaring bitchiness is came out well enough that I'm please with that part of it.  I haven't done anything like this in a long time but I think I might want to revisit the theme in the near future.

1 comment:

  1. It's shamefully wonderful Mistress Simone - it might also work nicely from the sissy's point of view - or even alternating?

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