tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-909856232048368446.post7427598020017593204..comments2024-01-10T16:33:53.623-05:00Comments on The Modern Goddess TG Caption Blog: [Explicit] "Breaking In A Filly" or "Montana Summer" Mistress Simonehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03830472323307586514noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-909856232048368446.post-89618165159267062222017-05-10T10:26:59.064-04:002017-05-10T10:26:59.064-04:00I wish i could be a country girl I wish i could be a country girl Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18075622402210778326noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-909856232048368446.post-47264118483875030402013-09-10T18:38:36.224-04:002013-09-10T18:38:36.224-04:00The writing. I will read the first panel and if th...The writing. I will read the first panel and if the writing is good, I will keep reading. If not, I may skip to the last panel to see if the destination is worth the read.<br /><br />I LOVED this one, loved the story, the gradual molding, the breaking in, the seduction and immersion into femininity. One of my favorite of your multipanels.<br /><br />I think it's important in a multipanel for the First Panel to draw you in and keep you reading. This one does that.Tamarahttp://www.rachelshaven.com/index.phpnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-909856232048368446.post-51066831479319911142013-09-08T12:50:10.118-04:002013-09-08T12:50:10.118-04:00Enjoyed the caption and it wouldn't of work ha...Enjoyed the caption and it wouldn't of work had it not been multi frame. To get me to read a multi panel, there images have to be strong as in clearly distinctive grabbing my attention. Once that's happened then yes I do finish them. There is less scope for personalized interpration but I think in this example it worked fine cos the story went they way I'd of wanted it to had.sissygurl belindahttp://sissygurl-belinda.tumblr.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-909856232048368446.post-73666312764889789692013-09-07T13:54:59.207-04:002013-09-07T13:54:59.207-04:00Even though I tend to write longer caps, I'm g...Even though I tend to write longer caps, I'm guilty of often just skipping through caps that are more than 2 or 3 panels. To be honest, probably the only reason I finished this one was because I so enjoy your writing. And this one was no exception!<br /><br />When I do write stories that need more than 1 panel, I'll often make the first pic set the scene with location, scenery, etc and have the 2nd cap contain the beautiful girl and big finish.Elisehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12845932729079435926noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-909856232048368446.post-64762297578353485522013-09-04T09:42:41.089-04:002013-09-04T09:42:41.089-04:00Nice series Simone! You've done a wonderful j...Nice series Simone! You've done a wonderful job on the layout as each panel has its own feel while keeping with the theme of the series whole. The story is told well and has a great arch. <br /><br />Multi panel captions are a mixed bag for me. I used to read every word of a multi panel cap, but lately I've read less and less of them. Even before I stopped reading almost all caps I couldn't finish many longer cap series because it was obviously going in a direction that I knew I wouldn't enjoy. This is a good example of a series that I probably wouldn't have finished. As is I read it all because it was from you. In this case I could feel the story going into a more willing and compliant direction and that's just not what I am looking for in a caption. <br /><br />I believe there is an inverse relationship between a longer cap and the ability for the reader to fill in details. In a short cap the reader can almost always tailor the story to their own particular fetishes and desires. But with each sentence, paragraph and panel that becomes more and more difficult. In this case a brief look at the pictures and the opening panel I was picturing an unwilling 'forced to be a cowboy's girl' story. I kept that idea going through the second panel and into the third panel... but when you started to write directly about her desires and any lack of resistance I found it harder and harder to keep up my own version that included those things. <br /><br />Finally in the fourth panel I couldn't add my own flavor to your cap. She was obviously willing and there was no wiggle room left. As I said earlier I did finish the cap but only because I knew your writing style would keep me interested. If this was from a new cap artist I probably wouldn't have finished it. I would have used the photos and their intro to create my own mental version of the cap. <br /><br />So to answer your last question, no. The pictures don't keep me reading. They do catch my interest and may get me started in reading a cap if they show potential, but I don't continue reading when the story is obviously going in a different direction than my current mood. <br />Caitlyn Maskedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02732033913089350905noreply@blogger.com