You have no idea how happy I was when Steffiemarie started captioning again! I've always thought of her as my "little sister" and she made some of my favorite captions. Most of all, she was a joy to talk to and someone who I could bounce ideas off of. Very much a kindred spirit. It was only a matter of time that I welcomed her back with a caption, and this is the end result. I think she makes a darling little thing, don't you agree?
I tried to keep it from being too racy. Steffi has never been one for hardcore captions, but this provides a different tint on sexuality. This is a steamy picture with a lot of sensuality oozing out of it, so I wanted to focus more on that than anything else. She's adorable, sexy, demure and alluring all at once so it was easy to feed off that when I wrote it. I wanted to make it a bit longer but I didn't want to bog it down with details that were obvious in the image. Instead, I let the characters convey the feeling of the situation; Steffi's plight and what the future held for her. Also, helplessness was a key theme here. Victoria was talking to me at the inception of the initial brainstorming and she zeroed in on the idea of Ron being powerless to change his situation. I honestly would love to expand on it because the idea of seeing someone hypnotized into BEING scared and submissive intrigues me. It's one thing to be programmed to be scared or programmed to like something, but to how devious would it be to have both programmed thoughts going at the same time? Needless to say Steffi's got a devious sister
So what do you think, dolls? I hope you enjoyed it. I appreciate any feedback you give, as it keeps me going. Until next time dolls.
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Simone,
ReplyDeleteI absolutely ADORE it :)
You've pushed as many of my buttons that could be physically pushed in a single cappie :)
/HUGS
FYI, I have no real problem with racy text, as long as it's not the ONLY text... and I prefer girl-on-girl or sissy-on-girl, as opposed to m/f hardcore :) But you know this already... :)
THANK YOU!
Wonderful caption Simone. I really liked the helplessness in Steffi's character. And that image... WOW!
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful caption! I love how devious Simone is, taking total control over her family. The picture is so fantastic too! It seems the hypnosis might have made Steffi a little bit of a bimbo. By hiding behind the curtain she's showing her cute panties to anyone who looks in the window.
ReplyDeleteThe text is a perfect companion to the image. They both have a gentle quality that makes the whole sweet yet sexy.
ReplyDeleteThis caption really seems to touch off some serious responses to the reader! I'm glad you all found it to be so much fun to read.
ReplyDeleteSteffi - especially glad YOU enjoyed it.
Caitlyn - it's an image I couldn't resist, it's a wonder why I didn't caption it before now, it was in one of my folders!
Chaosbeast - remember, she's been programmed to secretly want all of it, including the dominating sister and be discovered as a girl.
Anne - I'm glad you noticed the nature of the caption.
I liked the helplessness, the programming and how at the end Simone makes the direct reference to her panties before bringing out the dress. Every button imaginable pressed!
ReplyDeleteI'm not a fan of very graphic comments (we have imagination!) but the raciness was well judged building nicely up to crescendo.
We would all be so lucky to have an older sister like Simone. ^_^
ReplyDeleteI love the idea here, This is the sort of sweet embarrassment I crave in a Sissy caption.
blow me away so felt like i was there everything being done to me thank you Goddess
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